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Out of the rapids…

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Hopefully on a more even keel from here on in…

Video – Avril Lyons – NO AUDIO

The video is of the Sheffield Launch of Belfast Song on 7th November at Nether Edge Bowling Club. The air was buzzing as over 65 people packed into the venue. It was both nerve wracking and wonderful in equal measure.

Nerve-wracking in advance: This culminated in waking up in the early hours of Thursday morning feeling as if I was coming down with something. I took a paracetamol – but I was in a panic. ‘Have I got Covid? What if I’ve got Covid? How could I have Covid? I’ve had the vaccination …’ Eventually common sense kicked in: ‘I’ve got a bad case of nerves. And I need, if at all possible, to get back to sleep.’ Which I did.

And on the night, once everyone had settled into their seats, I was able to settle into mine: I could simply relax and go with the flow. I had a wonderful time and enjoyed every bit of it. It was a great event with which to mark the end of this first intense phase of publishing and promoting Belfast Song.

photo Kevin Hickey

This first phase, which started in October 2023 with beginning the work on the website, has been characterised by a steep learning curve on all fronts … In any new enterprise, it takes the courage to be an amateur … even more so, the older you get. It has also been marked by using email and WhatsApp to build on existing contacts and beginning to use Facebook to extend existing networks. All in all, I’ve wanted a strong one-to-one relationship with anyone interested in the book. That has been very rewarding, with exchanges by email or in person about relatives working in mills or growing up in Belfast. I’m delighted to say that those promoting the book most strongly are those who have read and loved it. However, I need more people to post reviews – as that way the positive message about the book spreads further. So, if you would be willing to do that, you could leave a review on:

I’m pleased to have had two good launches, but I won’t be doing any more. In this next phase, I will be looking for opportunities to fit in with what others may be organising – whether it be events in libraries, bookshops or festivals.

Interest still continues in Belfast. I did a telephone interview with belfastmedia.com which resulted in another article in the Andersonstown News.

There’s also been interest from abroad. I did a telephone interview with Talk Radio Europe for their Book Show on 15th October. This was broadcast at 6 pm on the evening of my Sheffield launch. There’s a 7-day catch up period. So, fingers crossed, I’ll be able to tune in by Thursday 14th November.

However for now, I’m looking forward to having the rest of November to take stock and think about next steps. By the end of of November, the first quarter figures from Troubador will be available and I will be able to consider how it has been going at their end. I still have 35 of the 200 books that Troubador delivered in August which should tide me over Christmas. I have invitations to speak to local groups from January. And I can talk with Troubador about a reprint.

That’s me for now. Your comments are always welcome.
Best wishes for Christmas and the New Year.

Belfast Song successfully launched in Belfast…

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I’ll start with the headlines in The Irish News on 30th September, ten days after the launch.  If you wish, you can read it online by free subscription to the Irish News. 

(The article states it is available through Troubador Publishing, available in bookshops and from Amazon. However if you buy a hard copy from Amazon I will end up paying Amazon £1.24. But if you buy an ebook, I will get £3.56. See my blog of 29/7: A book in the hand)

Back to Sunday, 15th September, a few days before I head to Belfast. I get a voice message from my good friend and short story writer, P Kearney Byrne. She is due to travel from Co.Clare to Belfast to interview me as the main part of the launch. She thinks she’s coming down with something and wants to alert me in case I want to line up somebody else as Plan B. I don’t even have to think about it. I simply can’t imagine setting up a similar arrangement with anyone else and certainly not at a few days’ notice. Plan B is a solo gig. I text back ‘I’ll pray for a miraculous recovery but will start preparing for Plan B.’ In the event, she goes from bad to worse.

On Wednesday night I am in bed in Belfast, trying to decide on the final reading. I’d easily chosen the first two. As a big theme in the book is the Home Rule Crisis of 1912, I had wanted to find a suitable excerpt on this as the third. Phil had disagreed. She had signposted me instead to other passages. So, in the early hours of the morning, having tried out and rejected my possibilities for a final reading, I realise that Phil is right. There is too much detail to expect any audience to absorb in a six minute reading. I choose one of the scenarios she’d mentioned, switch off the light and hope for some sleep.

Conway Mill

On Thursday, I go to meet Pauline Kersten at Conway Mill. She runs the Community Education Centre on the second floor. I know that the building is cavernous simply from my acquaintance with the ground floor where the cafe is located. Directions are not my strong point. However, on second attempt, I find the bright and busy Community Education Centre where I locate Pauline and between us we quickly decide how to organise the available space for the morning’s launch. All I need is to ask for a sign or two to be put either side of the lift door in the morning.

On Friday morning, Mal is dropping me (and the 24 books I’ve sent over in advance) back to the Mill bright and early. As we head to the front door, I recognise the woman looking somewhat lost outside as a friend who also has arrived in plenty of time. We haven’t seen each other in years. A mutual hug helps us both feel we are in the right place. She is waiting for another friend. I realise I may not have as much time as I think before my audience is here.
On my way to the room two members of CEC staff ask if they could buy a copy of Belfast Song. One woman tells me that she wants the book for her mother who worked in this very mill.

Up in the room, I meet the sound technician who tells me he will stay throughout the launch. I breathe a sigh of relief. I do not have to worry about anything going wrong with the sound! He and I have barely finished sound checks when another two women appear. They turn out to be friends of my sister Nano. I direct them to the ground floor cafe. I begin to feel nervous. I decide to set up a table in the lounge area where tea, coffee and biscuits will be served after the formalities of the launch. This is where I will sign books. In the meantime, I have the books, my belongings, notes and a copy of Belfast Song behind me on the long cupboard in the room.

The space quickly begins to fill… I am swept along in greeting family, friends and strangers. I discover how those I don’t know have heard about the launch – through a mailing sent out by Anne Reid, from St. Dominic’s PPU, from a message in the diocesan mailing organised by my sister-in-law Siobhan, and from a mailing from CEC earlier in the week. I greet friends I haven’t seen in years, and family members I haven’t seen since at least a year back.

And then it’s time to start…

What can I say? I am in the flow and enjoying myself. The warmth and enthusiasm of the audience exceeds expectations. Questions and comments flow.

A queue forms immediately the applause ends. I never manage to get to the table in the cafe area. I only now appreciate how long it takes to sign and chat to people. Someone brings me a cup of tea. The 24 books are gone. People pay cash as they order books that I will send to them. I don’t even have a box for money. I’m stuffing notes in a compartment of my bag… And then Pauline appears at the door. It’s gone three o’clock already. Where did the time go? She smiles and disappears again. Eventually the remnants of the audience and I wend our way out of the building. I am stunned and totally exhausted. But what a launch!

A book in the hand…

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makes light of all the effort involved to bring it here. Between signing off the cover and manuscript as print-ready and arriving home on Wednesday last week to find the kitchen worktop laden with brown paper parcels was shockingly quick. Troubadour had repeatedly said not to plan a launch as there could be a delay in the books being ready by publication date at the end of August.
To then be informed that the books would be printed and delivered a full five weeks early – well! I felt I’d scarcely bid Belfast Song off on its first steps into the world and here it was back on the doorstep. That it was delivered on Wednesday when it was due on Thursday added to my consternation. I couldn’t open a box. Instead I went about my business of clearing the last of my packing cases which was still only partially unpacked since our move here three years ago – all the better to make space for this new creature. Denis and I had a peaceful evening meal in the kitchen as if it was any other day.
And then on Thursday morning, when Denis was out with the dog, I opened a box and took out a single copy of Belfast Song.
I walked about the house with it, stroking its face, feeling its weight and marvelling at how transformed it was since I last saw it. I then took a deep breath in and looked closer… no misspellings glared back, the format of a particular section I’d been concerned about was right and proper. Denis came back and we had a look together.
And then…I didn’t know what to be at… here were the 200 copies that I’d asked to be delivered to home (the other 200 are stored at Troubador). They had to stay hidden until the official publication date. I’d already told my writing buddies in Shipyard that the printing was way ahead of schedule so they were in the know. Did I now pretend they weren’t here?
By Thursday afternoon, I’d recovered. I contacted Dave McClelland to check if he would have time to post another blog on the website and a further email to subscribers if I sent him material over the weekend. This will be the last until September when the book is out there – so if you’re reading this, you’re in the loop of those now in the know.
I’d arranged to meet a friend in Cafe #9 on Friday to talk about possibilities of when and how I might launch the book in Sheffield. I just took the book with me. It was the right decision. Sitting with the book between us, discussion about next steps seemed more real, possibilities more tangible.
Now as I won’t be blogging again until the book is out, a note about the economics of book selling.   
I didn’t know this until I started on this publishing business. My hope in sharing this is that if you decide to buy one or more copies, you can make informed choices as to where you buy from.
Just a reminder, I hope to offset the money I have invested in publishing this book. And, if at all possible, I want to avoid further costs in the process of selling.
The first thing you need to know is that the book trade takes discounts of between 45-60% of the cover price and the writer will receive between 25-85% depending on which retailer the book takes to market. This means that depending on print costs and how many copies are printed, a writer can actually make a loss per sale.
N.B What I am saying next only applies to smaller print runs – and as such hits small publishing houses and independent authors.
In my case, with a print run of 400 and the retail price for Belfast Song set at £10.99:
I will receive back:
£10.99 if the book is bought direct from me – at a launch or similar event. (And I can sign it as well.)
£5.36 if the book is bought via Troubador’s Online Bookshop
I will have to pay out:
£1.24 to Amazon for every copy of a book they sell (I’m talking about physical books here- see digital books below)
£0.69 to bookshops for every book they sell. (I support my local bookshop myself when I buy. I just would prefer not to support all of your respective bookshops when you buy.)
e-books are different. To cut a long story short: a digital copy of my book on Amazon will retail at £5.99. I will receive back £3.56 per ebook.
That’s me for now. Thanks you for reading this. If you feel like leaving a comment or two on the website, I’d enjoy hearing from you. I’ll be blogging again in September. Until then, hope you enjoy the rest of your summer.

The First Wave is Over

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Phew! The first wave of intense publishing activity has ebbed – and I’m still standing. Thanks to all of you for your support this far.
The big news is that we’ve got a book cover designed and agreed. I’ll post it on the website as soon as I have image to share. For now, I can tell you that it uses as its base the photograph of the millworkers that’s already on my website.
Thanks to Bill Allerton at Cybermouse for his ingenious design which he generously gifted to me and to the Troubador in-house designer who tweaked that and set it is as a book cover ready to go. The design is for front, spine and back and the cover will be in a matt laminate finish.
Can you get a sense of how delighted I am with it?
The other news is that I sent the the first proofread manuscript back to Troubador on Monday by special delivery to arrive midday Tuesday – and I’ve just been emailed the corrected version this morning. I know I mentioned it in last blog, but I want to say a big thanks to Jan Vallance and Denis Green for proofreading the manuscript in a tight space of time. I couldn’t have done it without you!
And I could not have done it if Denis hadn’t been willing to take the manuscript with us on  a week’s holiday to Pembrokeshire to continue the proofread. The photographs above are of Bosherston Lakes and the water lilies growing underwater all set to bloom across the lakes in June. So we did have time for good outings as well as work.
There was a final little drama on Monday afternoon. Denis and I were double checking some of the pages on the kitchen table. I had just made and set down a mug of tea carefully at my corner. I reached over to take the page from Denis – and knocked over the mug. A flurry of activity ensued to whisk the pages off the table on to a dry worktop  and mop and dry them using towels and then hairdryer. Thankfully, although stained at the edges, all proof marks were clear.
Embarrassed though I was to include a clump of such pages within the otherwise pristine manuscript, my overwhelming feeling was to get the blooming thing posted and out of my hair. Right then I just needed shot of it!

Blue-sky thinking vs real-time action

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At 4pm on Thursday 28th March, I picked up an email from Jessica, Production Controller at Troubador, with the complete typeset proofs of Belfast Song attached for proofreading.
I was expecting this. Shortly after I had signed on the dotted line on 19th February, she had sent me an outline of Approximate Production Timescales that would result in publication at the end of August.
However, back then, as I imagined the proofs arriving either side of Easter Sunday, you could say I was in blue-sky thinking. That is, thinking that is not grounded in immediate reality. In my mind’s eye the proofs arrive on a spacious day where there is nothing to distract me from the task in hand. I settle to co-ordinate how my two buddies and I can send off a corrected manuscript to Troubador within the two-week deadline.
Switch now to the reality of 4pm on the day before the Easter Bank Holiday weekend.  I have just about recovered from arriving back a few days earlier from a five day trip to Ireland via Shannon airport. Believe me, there is no easy or quick way to get from Sheffield to the West of Ireland. The immediate choice is to take the train to Edinburgh or Gatwick airport to then fly to Shannon. My husband Denis and I are in the throes of ascertaining which days family members are visiting during Easter week. We are sorting who is doing what: shopping, cooking, bed-making … you get the idea. Denis has agreed to be a proof-reader and meantime the other proof-reader, my writing buddy Jan, has her own plans to manage. I’ve an unexpected deadline to do with last minute arrangements for a mid-April conference that I’m helping to organise. That’s before I even think of day to day domestics such as walking the dog.
This is the state of mind in which I open the email. I am in touch with the necessity of real-time actions. Let’s call it overwhelmed to the point of panic by what I need to do asap.
 
On reading the email, I am aghast to discover that the task involves using a set of conventional proofreading marks that I have never seen before. I realise I have to choose: I either print out the proofs (all 344 pages) returning only those pages that need amending by post, or I mark the amendments on the PDF proof and send the complete PDF file to Troubador online.
Somehow, I find the presence of mind to actually open the PDF … oh my goodness … it is so exciting to see Belfast Song laid out in book format. I can imagine it on a shelf in a book shop or being launched to real audiences in Belfast and Sheffield. Another instance of blue-sky thinking?
By this time my ‘manager head’ is screwed on firmly: this manuscript has been redrafted five times with feedback from various writing buddies throughout. This included a proof read of the 5th draft. And then, over three years later, I did a 6th proofread before sending the manuscript to Troubador. So, although there will still be corrections, I trust they will be few by now. Troubador allows a total of nine weeks to include up to three proof reads before the author signs off the manuscript. So I reckon that any slippage on this first round timescale will be offset by speed of dealing with subsequent rounds.
I trust that this estimate is grounded in experience of real-time action.
Mary

Welcome

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Welcome to my website and my blog.
 
Thank you for taking the time to have a look. Between now and the publication of Belfast Song, I will be blogging on the journey to publication as it happens. Publishing a first novel is a BIG step. In my case, even more so, as I will be self-publishing.
 
Self-publishing is rapidly expanding as a viable alternative to the traditional approach. Writers & Artists Year Book 2024 has a section entitled Self-publishing and indie authors whereas the 2021 year book included only a few entries within their listing of publishers. It is also becoming more complex. I hope my blog will be helpful to any writers who are considering this as a possible route.
 
It does mean more involvement in every stage of the process and in particular, in promotion and publicity. So, by way of establishing a base camp for the expedition to publication, I’ve invested in a website well in advance of the intended publication date of September 24. That’s been a learning curve in itself.
 
In my next blog, I’ll write more about why I chose this route.
 
The other two themes on which I intend blogging is on the writing of Belfast Song and also, on anything literary that catches my attention and spurs me to write a few paragraphs.
 
Thank you for reading this far. If you continue to dip in, I look forward to any comments or questions you would like to share with me.
Mary